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2019/05/09
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>>16260
What an amazing story. Perfect western style and such a clever plot. The only problem is that it's too short. We must have more. Here's an alternate ending to give us more to read about these two. It might not be as good an ending, but it's better than just letting the story stop.
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Slowly she began to ride him up and down, increasing her pace. The bulging veins of his smooth young shaft rubbed against the sides of her slick pussy, and soon Texas Red was nearing the edge of climax. He moaned, his voice cracking in that peculiar early adolescent way, and his pelvis lifted up, pushing his dick as deep into the Ranger's insides as possible. He came explosively, gasping as he shot a long spurt of cum into his captor's pussy.
The Ranger came at the same time, her tight body tensing, muscles pulling tight as she squeezed his enormous cock, then she groaned in pleasure and collapsed on top of Texas Red. Her breasts were hot and swollen with excitement as they pressed against his face. His dick plopped out of her slit, strings of thick white cum dribbling onto the blanket.
The boy blushed hotly and scowled as he lay as still as possible and waited, his semi-hard dick feeling wet and cold in the night air. Once he was sure that she was asleep, he very slowly slid one hand free from the ropes. He had been slowly loosening his hands during the ride, and now he very carefully reached toward the Ranger's gun.
Just as he wrapped his little fingers around the butt of the huge weapon he froze. He felt the icy touch of sharp metal against his dick.
"Don't even think about it, kid."
Texas Red shivered and looked up to see the Ranger's hard blue eyes staring back down at him.
"I've got a knife against that little dick of yours and all it takes would be a little twitch to cut the damned thing clean off."
"Ma'am, please, I'm sorry," he stammered, "I didn't mean anything. You wouldn't cut a little boy. I've got so much to live for!"
"A dick's not going to do you any good at the end of a rope."
"No, wait! Please!" Tears filled his eyes and then poured down his cheeks, "I don't want to lose my dick!"
The Ranger stared down into his terrified eyes and carefully took the pressure off her knife. "I hope you've learned your lesson, kid. If you're lucky, I might even fuck you again before you hang."
She felt the tip of Big Iron jab into her side and the boy suddenly grinned hugely and laughed.
"Now what're you going to do, stupid? If you try to cut my dick, I'll blow you away. Adults are always so stupid, always thinking they're in charge. I'd have to be pretty stupid to let someone cut off my big dick."
"What a damned waste," growled the Ranger.
The cold blade slid smoothly through the boy's skin and split his moist dick from his body.
Texas Red shrieked and flailed. His hand clenched around the gun but the trigger refused to squeeze with the safety on.
The Ranger rolled off him and knocked the gun from his hand with a sharp kick. Both his hands went straight for his crotch as he screamed and blood dribbled between his fingers.
"My dick! My fucking dick!" he wailed as he spotted the pale tube of flesh bleeding on the blanket. "I'll kill you, bitch!"
The Ranger reached for her gun and the boy turned to run. He scrambled barefoot into the desert, holding his bleeding stump with both hands.
"Little idiot," growled the Ranger, "Don't you dare get yourself killed."
She disabled the safety on her gun and ran naked into the night to track him down.
Texas Red was scrambling up a rocky cliff. He looked over his shoulder and spotted her bare skin shining in the moonlight as she followed.
"You think I'm through, don't ya? Just because I lost my dick doesn't mean I can't still kill people. I'll get you and I'll get everyone who comes after me, just like I always have!"
"Be careful you stupid kid!"
His eyes were blurry with tears and his belly throbbed with pain as he stumbled through the rocks.
"I'm Texas Red and I never lose!" he yelled, and then he screamed as his foot got caught between two rocks and twisted. He tumbled down the cliff, his body smashing against countless rocks, his arms and legs snapping like twigs.
The Ranger found him at the bottom of the cliff. He was gasping for air and coughing up blood.
"There goes 10 grand, you idiot."
"Please," he croaked, staring up at her naked body and twitching, "I want my dick back. Please, give it…"
She poked his dead body with her foot and then shook her head. "Looks like neither of us get what we want today, kid."
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