> Appeals to Aoi
Wow, that's a tag now?
I wonder if I should feel flattered to be considered so famous that saying a story appeals to me is supposed to describe it in a way people are expected to understand.
Or if it's a sign of depopulation of gurochan becoming so desperate that one has to direct their story to someone right in the title to ensure at least somebody actually reads it, lol.

As for the story itself, looks like a promising if indeed somewhat confusing start, but having questions just adds another reason to look forward to the next chapters in hope of getting answers. Given that it's just a start though, there's little else to say but: give us more.

That being said, what about the Car Fight? Your recent post in that thread gave out impression that you were going to write something in that setting. Or is it that as you were contemplating it, it evolved into a new idea that we see here instead?