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So, uhm, this was sitting in my mind for some time, and I don't think it can work as anything else but a Vocaloid song, intended for Rin and Len of course, the problem is I'm neither a poet nor a musician, and it's not like I actually know Japanese in the first place, so the grammar is probably all wrong on top of non-existing rhyme and rhythm, but I can't imagine this in any other form, so here's what I ended up with…
I mean, there's always a chance that there's someone here who knows Japanese and can write music and decides to pick it up and turn it into something actually working, right?..
Or if not, at least I hope you can still enjoy the idea behind the lacking realization…

Double Suicide
(song)


一緒に一緒に
一緒に生まれた
一緒に一緒ょに
一緒に生きてた
そしてとうぜん
一緒に死にたい

issho ni issho ni
issho ni umareta
issho ni issho ni
issho ni ikiteta
soshite touzen
issho ni shinitai

together together
together we were born
together together
together we lived
so then naturally
together we want to die

***


双子だから
ずっと一緒だ
一緒じゃないと
想像出来ない

futago dakara
zutto issho da
issho ja nai to
souzou dekinai

because we’re twins
we’re always together
not being together
we can not imagine


***


死の概念を
初めて知った頃
それも一緒と
当たり前だ

shi no gainen wo
hajimete shitta koro
sore mo issho to
atarimae da

when we’ve first learned
the concept of death
it also being together
was obvious for us

***


それから多くの
時間がすぎた
それでもずっと
空想だった

sore kara ooku no
jikan ga sugita
soredemo zutto
kuusou datta

since then a lot
of time has passed
and yet we always
kept this fantasy

***


一緒に死ぬか
一緒に死なないか
それはけして
疑問ではない

issho ni shinu ka
issho ni shinanai ka
sore wa keshite
gimon de wa nai

should we die together
should we not die together
it is absolutely
not a question

***


唯一の問題
一緒にならば
どんな方法で
死ぬのだろう

yuiitsu no mondai
issho ni naraba
donna houhou de
shinu no darou

the only problem is
if is has to be together
in what way
should we die

***


高い橋から
飛び降りましょうか
意味がないけど
もう双子だよ

takai hashi kara
tobiorimashou ka
imi ga nai kedo
mou futago da yo

let us jump
from a high bridge
although there’s no point
we’re already twins

***


風呂に入れて
手首を切ろうか
優しい抱擁で
死を待ちましょう

furo ni hairete
tekubi wo kirou ka
yasashii houyou de
shi wo machimashou

entering a bath
should we cut our wrists
in a gentle embrace
let us wait for death

***


あるいは縊れて
ちとつのロープで
桜の下で
踊りましょう

arui wa kubirete
hitotsu no roopu de
sakura no shita de
odorimashou

or else hanged
by a single rope
under a cherry tree
let us dance

***


気づく前に
心中の考え
自然愉快
楽しくなった

kizuku mae ni
shinjuu no kangae
shizen yukai
tanoshiku natta

before we have noticed
thoughts of double suicide
became natural pleasant
and fun

***


全裸で外へ
吹雪のなか
雪で遊んで
凍死ゆこう

zenra de soto he
fubuki no naka
yuki de asonde
toushi yukou

naked outdoors
into snowstorm
playing with the snow
let us freeze to death

***


あるいはガソリンを
振り掛けたら
光り輝いて
燃やしてよう

arui wa gasorin wo
furikaketara
hikarikagayaite
moyashiteyou

or else with a gasoline
having sprinkled ourselves
shining brightly
let us burn

***


腹を切れて
内臓が溢れて
お互いの心臓を
切り取りましょう

hara wo kirete
naizou ga koborete
otagai no shinzou wo
kiritorimashou

cutting our bellies
with spilling viscera
let us tear out
each other’s hearts

***


気づく前に
心中の考え
刺激過ぎる
心臓発作

kizuku mae ni
shinjuu no kangae
shigeki sugiru
shinzou hossa

before we have noticed
thoughts of double suicide
were too stimulating
a heart attack

***


一緒に一緒に
一緒に生まれた
一緒に一緒ょに
一緒に生きてた
そして遂に
一緒に死んだ

issho ni issho ni
issho ni umareta
issho ni issho ni
issho ni ikiteta
soshite tsui ni
issho ni shinda

together together
together we were born
together together
together we lived
so then finally
together we died
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