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[Option ZĪ©] Ontological Scintillation

Amanda rotates brazenly about the hyperplane orthogonal to the subspace she had occupied thus far. A pulsating, metallic voice rings through her skull, and the all-too familiar warning about hazardous Hume levels plays in a stilted monotone. Yet, heedless of the warning, she continues in her affine transgression, feeling the uneven inertia of her body as its relativistic mass distorted along the gradient line perpendicular to her axis of rotation. She felt as an astronaut slipping past the event horizon of a black hole, without the comfort of the transcendental embrace awaiting her at the center. Finally, her body left the semistable equilibrium it had occupied since her birth, and buckled as its three-dimensional curvature was no longer constrained snugly within its Schumme energy well. Though already distorted by nonlinear Lorentz dilation, she was able to see her upper arms, her left thigh and several of her fingers vanish from sight, leaving clean, round cross-sections floating about her fisheye view. The heads of the nearby swimmers seemed to fade away into infinity as her every disjoint piece floated in roughly in the direction she had been running, rotating in unconstrained hyperspherical orbits about an invisible center of mass. Helplessly, she watched as her breasts decoupled from her chest, passing through her bikini as its straps slipped through her shoulders, having been displaced along newfound coordinates. She couldn't help but blush as she noticed her uterus among the dozens of her internal organs now joining the throng, moving as if attached by invisible springs to her body, if her body were two meters ahead of her.

All at once, she completed one half-rotation, sealing her fate as she was bombarded with isomers of her own organic matter, ranging from merely foul-smelling to lethal. Nevertheless, a smile crossed her lips as the now-corrosive blood began to seep from her hollow casing, disappearing into the unseen void from which she had just returned. With the last of her strength fading, she felt a distant sense of relief. Though it had long since ceased to occupy the subspace observable from the pool area, her disembodied bladder had finally disgorged its contents, freeing her of the burden that had gripped her so abruptly.

<<GOOD END>>
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