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It sucked for several reasons. Though VisitorBlack is a talented writer, this one was pure shit. Storywise, not grammarly. (pun)

1-I don't give two shits about who these names are. Nor do I care. Describe them ffs. Simply putting names and assuming everyone is familiar with an obscure anime is fatal mistake.

2-No guro. Just the characters' ideas and discussions about why this long-named girl would be sold and made livestock, and…bam, she is served.
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