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Sure. Well first of all I'm slightly envious of your skillful descriptions. It's good prose in my opinion (I should probably take notes lol.)

And I like the gratuitous splatter, and the way the snuff bunnies change their tune from willing to reluctant adds a nice piquancy too.

I enjoyed Britney's demise most, because I have a preference for more real and less fantastical stuff, but of course that's just me. The whole story kept my attention though, short and sweet as it was. I reckon there was just enough story to carry the sexy gore.

I can't find anything to criticize tbh, I guess you spent some time polishing it and ironing out the bugs.

I didn't bother looking into the Rammstein lyrics tbh, though I expect they are the cherry on the cake for those who want it.

Anyway, I must remember to check out some of your other writings, I know I've read some already, although I don't remember which off the top of my head.