>>16546

I had a lot of fun writing chapter 9, and it only took a few hours. TBH I didn't really even plan it, it just happened on a whim.

Yes, the motive thing you mention was an important factor, I needed the family to be angry - and in a strange way, that reflects my own motivation too - otherwise I kinda feel "Yawn, time to do the gratuitous rape, torture and splatter formula again." And I don't really want to repeat myself - even though due to the nature of the story I don't think I can avoid it.

So by adding that chapter, I thought it added a nice twist to things, and gave myself the enthusiasm for the next part. Like I said earlier, the story seems to take on a life of it's own, and sometimes I'm just going along for the ride.