>>16658
Well I for one am keen to see where it goes!

I wouldn't mind more description of the girl, although maybe you plan to add details as you go along.

It seems nicely written to me, flows nicely and nothing jarred, apart from :
>She entered the 2x2 meter room, which immediately closed behind her.

The room closed? (Yeah I know you said it's just a draft, I'll shut up now lol).