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Sorry about taking so long to notice the new chapter but I've been rather tied up this weekend and have only now gotten free.

My hobbies aside, I absolutely loved this chapter. The death was especially exquisite although I'm not sure a piece of leg with lots of lactic acid build up will make for a good ham. Probably be really tough and gamy to be honest.

And is it ever a good thing Tesni didn't do what I'd have done in her situation when her and Kaisa went in for round two. Honestly, I wasn't expecting the return of our heroine but I'm not overly disappointed she survived. Rather, I'm looking quite forward to when her brazen attitude does get her killed. Perhaps a double death in some sort of spinning pool? Just making a suggestion since it has come up more than once.

Seriously though, if I was Tesni when the dildo went off I'm fairly sure my reaction would be to put my mouth where my hands were and see if I couldn't rip out Kaisa's throat since strangling obviously wouldn't work. Then again, I've never had my sensitive inner walls mercilessly shredded before so perhaps I'd react differently to the pain than I think.

And since you so lovingly asked for more suggestions I do have another. Try not to read so accurately with this one or I might be tied up for another weekend.

Let's go with another young lady but not physically fit; more in a good shape from basic diet and exercise. Soft but firm would be a good description. Half Chinese and White with a dash of exotic flavor mixed in giving her that perfect look where you can't quite tell her origin. Somewhere around average height with moderately sized breasts and a more demure attitude but quick to panic in the face of danger despite her submissive tendencies. Anything else I think I'll leave up to your wonderful imagination with one tiny request; if you do write a chapter or two on her can she partake of a machine that blends her insides and sprays them out while she is alive? Something like an immersion blender iron maiden hybrid but only below the waist?
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