Thank you, i'm always looking for stories where a girl is being raped as she dies and it's surprisingly rare. For not finding the stories good enough I've seen writer communities come up with the reason for what you discribed being that the writer often has a perfect version they're aware of but often can't put it into words. So the version they write is always being compared to that version inside their head.

However the reader doesn't know of that perfect version so they can only judge what is written down on the page. And in your case what you put down was an extremely hot and fun to read story.

Also I have some other suggestions for girls but don't want to flood you with way too many suggestions.