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Another thing about Bob's character, and maybe a reason I didn't describe him much, is that when I started writing this, I assumed my readership would be mostly male (I think of 16 year old kids covertly fapping to this, and sharing it on their phones, hoping their mums wont find out lol).

So of course Bob is a placeholder for the reader to put himself into. That's also why he's the sole male in the rape/torture/snuff parts. Having two guys is so ewww.

As it turns out, it seems I have a number of female readers, no doubt who identify with the ladies in the story. I'm not an expert on women, (although I did see a picture of one once), and they seem to be happy with what I'm doing. It's been a fascinating process for me TBH.