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>>16712
>I do like Sol's idea and kind of cyberpunky porny torture device.

So do I. But unless it could be practically realizable, then it doesn't belong in this story, and should stay in fantasy cyberpunk dystopia land.

Let me explain. It's a suspension of disbelief thing, and where the line should be drawn. For me it's a big turn on that things like the Masher could actually be built, and I think would perform as described. Quite often I do calculate stuff to figure out dynamic forces etc. Of course there are plenty of things in this story that couldn't really happen, I mean if it was 100% accurate, then the building inspectors would never have allowed it in the first place.

And lots of stuff I just skip over for convenience of not having to bother explaining it.

But so far, all the machines could be built. Some are a bit borderline, like the ripper-dildo. I think it's practical, but maybe wouldn't perform so spectacularly IRL. I do take allow some liberties in the service of splatter.

A corollary of this approach, is that when I'm describing the gore and splatter, I'm mostly just describing what would really happen, So in a sense it's not fantasy at all, but a gruesome description of reality. And again, I might add some details for effect or humour, I mean it is supposed to be entertaining.

So that's my approach, and I won't be deviating from it much. It is what it is.

Having rambled on now for ages, I should point out that Sol's ideas are really nice. The one that seems to be the main problem is the razor-wire shotgun net thing. I don't think it wold really perform well. The others are technically ambitious but doable, and so I think they'll be included at some point.

This is why I don't really want suggestions for machines etc. I don't want to hurt peoples feelings by telling them their ideas don't belong in this story.>>16712
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