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>I honestly had no idea that you were being so accurate with the weights as I'm so used to writers using random numbers as measurements. (Personal favourite was a woman being given an 46a cup bra and being described as thin)

That's one hell of a ribcage lol. I don't know if I'm being accurate, just desperately trying not to seem ridiculous.

>For 2 sure, dancers are good if they win because they let the girls have those different body types plus they can have a wider spread of ages. (Gymnasts are pretty much used up by 24) I was thinking youngest 10 oldest 28 with a 40 year old teacher

Sounds good to me. It bothered me a little that gymnasts, are all going to be slim, firm, taut, muscular and petite etc. (I've nothing against that of course), where some squishier types would be nice too. Voluptuous is a nice word.

>For 3 sure, to be honest with the girls I suggested I kinda got focused on girls in school uniforms and forgot the uniqueness that clothing can bring

Focussing on girls in school uniform is always going to be an understandable temptation! I've decided to move away from the whole girls in PJs thing. I think the descriptions could work better if they are in a variety of clothes.

And of course, it doesn't need to be a school trip. Really it could be anything plausable, as long as the meat arrives at the farm.

I don't want this to become a chore for you, so don't kill yourself over it. I mean, really it should be me doing it, but if you're going to enjoy it, then go ahead. I'm pretty sure you'll be better at it than I am.