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@thedarkhero, as for numbers, you can do as many as you like.

Despite Sol's protestations about the practicality of it, I don't think the amount of splatter should be limited by such niceties. I can make a 50-seat bus disappear, anyway. It's fantasy fiction, and anything is possible.

Not all the characters need to be fully described (or really described at all) to be honest. For instance, Bob's quite interested to know how many girls will fit in the hamster wheel, I guess those ones don't even have to have names, so if you like to just make some principal characters, I'll just bulk up the numbers with NPC types for the splatter scenes.

So I'll leave it up to you. If you do 12 or 60 it's fine by me. After all, any number at all is a big help.

Reading between the lines, I get the idea that you like the idea of describing the relationships between the girls, and if that's prominent, I'll try to respect it in the writing as best I can.

You have plenty of time, as I've got to deal with the Bitches first, (I haven't started writing that yet) and then there'll be a bridging chapter, (probably with Sol's chinese girl getting her innards souped and squirted), then I'll do the bus as a final hurrah. Then I think I'll wrap the story up there. There will be huge amounts of gratuitous splatter, so hopefully everyone will be happy!
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