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>>16814

It does bother me a little that the characters aren't really well developed. I mean, basically they're all just me, but with added mannerisms.

Bob scratched his beard.
Emma pursed her lips.
Kasia said "Yay!"

etc.

I suppose I'm being a bit hyperbolic, but I kinda feel that's how it is sometimes. Still, probably can't be helped. We are Groot.
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