Rewritten with the help of Squunch



Kim's Last Night



Kim was a lonely girl, pale skin, long brown hair and big blue eyes. She was 21 years old, she liked to read: books, manga, comics, anything was right for her. Unfortunately, her peers didn't share her weakness for reading so she hadn’t any friends. For this reason, when Monika, the newcomer girl, proposed her a girls-night-in at her home, Kim accepted immediately.

Monika was a beautiful girl, black hair down to her shoulders, fringe. She approached Kim apparently without reason. She was also passionate about books, in a few days they became friends.

Evening started with a pizza at Monika’s home, they were alone. Kim wore a dark green t-shirt, very large for her. It was a warm night and she didn't wear trousers, only a pair of underwear hidden under the shirt. Monika wore a light pajamas, light pink which highlights a shapely body. The two girls chatted all evening, they watched a film on Netflix, Monika showed her friends her library, she read her an excerpt of "Rant", of Chuck Palahniuk, her favourite book. the evening passed pleasantly, the two girls joked, ate and drank a little. Kim felt she had finally found a friend!
It was the one o’clock, Kim was beginning to be tired. She looked around but Monika was not there, maybe she was in the kitchen. She got up to go to the bathroom. The door was at the end of the corridor, she walked humming a tune. She was almost at the door when Monika came out from an adjacent room and rushed against her banging her against the wall. Kim felt a severe pain in the stomach. The other girl stepped back, Kim felt something get out of her abdomen, she didn't understand what it was until she saw Monika with a long knife stained with blood in hand. Monika laughed. The left hand was in her pants moving slowly. Kim looked down, she saw blood, a lot of blood, a deep wound in her flesh. The girl trembled, mouth and eyes wide open, looking at who she thought was a friend.

“Beautiful! Very beautiful! The knife that penetrates the flesh! What a feeling, Kim! You should see your face!”

“Please, you do…”

“Aw, sorry! I forgot something!” she hit her again, a deep stab above the right breast. Kim was terrified, she couldn't hold back the pee and a warm trail runs down her leg. She wanted to move but the pain was too much and she slide along the wall onto the ground. Monika watched her breathing with difficulty continuing to masturbate. She sat next to her, almost tenderly, she caressed her hair, looked at the wounds with a curious air. Kim couldn't believe it, she was dying and her friend looked her aroused. Monika watched the wall behind her victim "No blood on the wall. I have not sunk enough. What a pity. I like it."

“Monika, call an ambulance ple…”

The soon-to-be killer slipped two fingers in the stomach wound, Kim tried to scream but what came out was more like a gurgle. Monika brought her blood-stained fingers back in her underwear “I beg…” another gurgle, a bubble of blood exploded from her lips, Monika panted more and more excited, she had the knife in hand again.

On the ground blood mixed with urine, Kim was getting weaker and weaker. Monika accelerated the rhythm, she felt the orgasm was near. Another lunge in the stomach and the girl came, screaming with pleasure, continuing to stab her victim, dirtying everywhere with blood. After not less than ten stabs, Monika stopped, caught her breath, the knife still stuck in Kim's side. The poor girl had cuts every, defense wounds on her arms, a lot of wounds in the chest and abdomen. Monika staggered to her feet, still shaken by the orgasm, a wide smile on her face.

“It's a shame you can't try it sweetheart. It’s… heavenly!”

Kim no longer had the strength to respond her. She was choking in her own blood, her lungs full of liquid, her eyes wandering aimlessly. She remained alive for several minutes, spitting and gasping until she bent her head forward with a last gurgle.

Monika stood for a while looking at her work. Her first murder. Still aroused she went to bed. She would take care of the cleaning the next day.