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Can't believe it took over a day for me to find this little piece. I'm ashamed; I assure you. Honestly, you two and your stories are the only reason I still visit this site considering everything else is just not to my taste.

With that said, this was a fun read, a bit different than your usual work, but similar enough where it counts. The only downside in this story that I can think of is that it went by too quickly. Unlike The Interview, Stretch Goals, ZomBFFs, etc, where time is taken to go in depth with what's happening and things are taken gradually, everything was just kind of thrown into one chapter for this chapter. Nothing really wrong with any of that, per say, as I already said this one-shot story was a fun read, but it inherently ranks lower than the previously mentioned stories and those similar to them.

Do you two have any future stories planned, or are you just taking it bit-by-bit and writing whenever you feel like it?
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