OK since you commented on my story< i had to check yours as well.

unfortunately it is to huge for quick read, but I finished 2 chapters.

I am not too interested in all that torture thing itself but I like that you are taking "minimal plot" development seriously so it is still worth reading even for that.
and it is interesting to see all those torture methods you invent although making machine just so squish loli girls is a bit overboard effort LOL it is good that it is only a story LOL

On the chaper 4 I got confused with continuity, because Kasia kinda died and now she is fine again in the chapter 5 and later.