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>OK since you commented on my story< i had to check yours as well.

Thanks, Onix, really appreciate it!

>unfortunately it is to huge for quick read, but I finished 2 chapters.

Yeah, when it's finished it'll be probably around 100k words, about the same as a full sized novel.

>I am not too interested in all that torture thing itself

Yep it's pretty bad in places, although I try to keep the feel of it quite lighthearted. I mean, I've read some stuff which is really shocking, and I'm quite affected by. I don't wanna do that lol, this is supposed to be just for shits and giggles.

>but I like that you are taking "minimal plot" development seriously so it is still worth reading even for that.

Really it's just fap material, but with enough plot to carry it along.

>and it is interesting to see all those torture methods you invent although making machine just so squish loli girls is a bit overboard effort LOL it is good that it is only a story LOL

Very true - don't try this at home kids! I think I said elsewhere, that the stars of the show are the machines.

>On the chaper 4 I got confused with continuity, because Kasia kinda died and now she is fine again in the chapter 5 and later.

Well, I like to confuse my readers a bit! Keeps them on their toes… I think it's nice to toy with emotions. Anyway, I wanted to kill Kasia off in such a delicious way, but I thought she was useful to keep around for plot reasons. So thru the magic of writing I could have the best of both worlds lol.