>>17502
Please let me second the request for pregnant victims.

I am certain that you have many fans. Your most ardent admirers are simply unable to type with both hands by the time they finish your story. The others are busy nitpicking.

I enjoy the style, and I don't mind if the verb tenses aren't always correct. English is hard. I would only request you check your pronouns. I find myself skipping "he/him" so I can get to my preferred "she/her" action. That's my one handed nitpicking.