Yeah, I'm still enjoying your stuff quite a lot, and I'm sorry I haven't posted sooner.

I really liked Afternoon of Study, even though I'm not terribly into throat slitting. The concept, the setting, and your attention to detail all came together nicely.

I loved Home Raid, again, despite not being a huge fan of throat slitting. Your description of Julie was spot on, and she behaved exactly as I would've wanted. Thank you so much for posting that!

I would second what dudet said about pronouns. They can be a bit of a distraction when reading about a female character being referred to as he or him.