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>That is damn sexy indeed!

Well, it was supposed to be the machines that are sexy.

>Lost it at boomer, I really like your tongue-in-cheek writing style.


Thanks, I'm not funny enough to write a comedy, but I like to keep things light hearted.

>Can't wait for the bitches to get squished (and crunched). Something about Amy and Christy are really turning me on, I think it's because they are so innocent and not supposed to be there, yet a gruesome fate awaits them.


Interesting observation. Well, it wasn't really intentional but glad you like it.

>I'm so happy that you are writing again!


Thanks! Now that I have clarity as to where the story is going, things should flow a little easier. Chapter 17 is already well under way, but I decided to release what I had now, rather than make you all wait longer. Besides, I think shorter chapters are a bit more digestible.
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