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>The wonderful stories of Mr. Hyde and my feeble attempt at one…

Too modest! <whispers> He may be a great writer, but I know which story I prefer…

>…are very mild and cute, while your story is, well, it's gory alright! It does have it's cute moments though, like when Bob gently took Miyu's virginity (albeit while Emma carved her name into her arm). I probably forgot to mention it, but I really liked that part. It added depth to the torture, which I'm all for.

That's interesting… When I wrote it, I was like, "Meh - she might as well get tortured a little bit, while she's being raped." And I didn't think much about it TBH. So I'm glad it worked for you!

Bob is such a nice guy, a real softy. He just has a penchant for splattering cuties.

>I might also add that Claire's death in this story is by far the least gory one, so stay tuned!

I certainly will. I like that your stories have a bit of an edge to them (compared to some other great writers around here who will remain nameless lol.)