>>17636
That was lovely, I always wanted someone to write a story about breast stuffing and finally it happened ;) and as usual, you got perfect context.
Maybe I am greedy but you could have spent more time on that procedure than just mention it ;)

Though the ending was a bit sad but still fine. It was pretty interesting to see this kind of story twist from comedy into reality ;)
Maybe just to make it less sad you could say in the story that it is too late to change her mind now because her insides are already torn apart.
But since it happened, I suspect it has to affect upcoming events somehow ;) Looks like cooks suffered horrible psychological trauma there too LOL

Anyway, even on that part, I like all that nasty gruesome stuff happening instead of just usual plain cartoonish skewering.
So I can just agree with Squunch criticism more gruesome details would be very nice.


One thing I don't like is that you do every girl separately it would've been much better if they could observe their friends being processed or even help.
But with that sort to ending, I kinda understand why you didn't.