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>the only thing I would have liked even more, is some anatomical details of the "resistance" that the spike met

Thank you for the feedback, I agree with you. One of the (many) things that I like about your writing is the really well researched details. As you said it is time consuming though, and I usually don't have a lot of time available for writing. Therefore, it's more rewarding to get the stories out quickly than to research every detail, perfecting it and releasing stories once every blue moon. It would definitely make it better, but it is kinda beyond the scope of my scribbling, at least for now.

I will research more for the next, final chapter though. Emily's death will not be as gruesome but will involve a lot of anatomy. I don't think I'll spoil any more than that…

I'm also really happy that you like the sex scenes. They are a big part of it all for me, and way too many snuff stories basically consists of "man touches clit, girl cums." There's a lot more to it than that…
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