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Hey, OfixN, I confess I haven't caught up with all your stories yet, but really enjoyed that last one!

Love the natural dialogue between the characters, and you've got some nice turns of phrase "ferrous taste", and that girls body turning into a "sieve". I might steel those lol.

I'll forgive your occasionally funny English (sometimes it adds to the charm - I did lol at "mouthpiece" - funny translation), and the part where your pronouns slipped again.

Great stuff.

Yeah, maybe it's a little bit repetitive, but I guess that's your kink, and I totally understand that. You really did the stabbings justice, very nice detail.

But I have the same problem keeping deaths original, (I mean how many ways are there to describe a girl being squashed flat?). But I wouldn't worry too much about it, after all, people are reading this stuff for the thrill, not spectacular novelty.

I'll read and comment on another of yours when I'm in the mood for some more stabby fun :)