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I love the newest story, Bloodlust! Everything you write is seriously a treat. I have a couple ideas for things that I would love to see happen to Julie in a story, if you're still open to ideas!

- let her get stabbed (or shot) once in the stomach and then escape and try to survive for a while. I think usually she gets a dozen bullets right away, so it might be interesting to see her deal with a single wound for a while that slowly bleeds, makes her wonder if she'll live, maybe cause stomach acid to leak out and injure her other organs. Of course her pursuer would find her before she made it to a hospital or anything!

- One of her murderers is her high school biology teacher. He knows the human body all too well, and makes sure to target parts of her body that won't be lethal right away. He could describe to her which internal organs he's damaged, and maybe even give her a little 'pop quiz', hurting her more for every question she gets wrong.

- Put her in another scenario where she has to choose the location of injuries on herself and/or others. One of my favorite stories was Surviving the Game, especially the end scene where they had to try to survive bullets to the torso. The way she bravely says 'okay try to aim for my stomach, but try not to hit my spine' was amazing. I think a similar scenario would be a fucked up game/island setting, but this time Julie is made captain for a team of girls, which are given near-impossible tasks to complete. Each time someone fucks up, Julie is given 2 options for what happens to them (eg a bullet in her stomach or cut off her left hand). That would add stress of trying to pick the least harmful option each time to keep her friends alive.

Anyway, hope at least one of these resonates with you, but even if it doesn't I know I can expect some good stories either way!
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