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Julie's Jurassic Adventure




"We're gonna get to see fucking dinosaurs," Julie laughed, giddy with excitement. "Can you fucking believe it?"

“You got your permission slip signed?”

“Fuck yeah, I fucking did. Holy shit, I’d forge that shit if I had to. No way I’m missing this shit.”

“My mom didn’t want to sign mine,” Melissa said. “I guess she saw one of those Jurassic Park or World or whatever movies when she was a kid, and it fucked her up.”

“That’s bullshit! So you’re not going?”

Melissa pulled a piece of paper out of the back pocket of her jeans and showed it to Julie.

"Ha!" Julie squawked. "So you forged it?"

"Nah, I was pretty convincing."

"Nice! What'd you tell her?"

"Mostly that this is a once in a lifetime opportunity, and if she didn't let me go I'd hate her forever. I mean do you know how much these tickets cost?"

"Like fifty thousand dollars, right?" Julie had looked it up online a few nights earlier, out of curiosity.

"Yeah, just to get in the park. They're pretty much comping us everything."

"I still can't believe it. What are the odds?"

“I know right? I think Principal Harrison said like eight thousand schools applied for sponsorship, and they only picked ours.”

“Makes me wanna play the lottery.”

“You bitches ready to get eaten by a dinosaur?” Mikey asked, meandering over.

“Dude, shut the fuck up,” Julie retorted. “I read the park is safer than most zoos.”

“It’s safe, sure, but you know the only reason our school got picked is because Principal Harrison’s going to feed you two to a T-Rex.”

Julie giggled. “You’re fucking stupid, Mikey.” She saw the lust in his gaze, and he seemed quite pleased with himself for making her laugh. It was something she had become accustomed to over the last couple years, since puberty had kicked in and she was no longer a chubby little girl.

Her butt had grown particularly round and prominent and her stomach had flattened out, although there was still some baby fat that created tiny love handles around the waistline of her cut off jean shorts. Her breasts hadn't grown as much as she'd hoped, but they had a nice shape to them, and they perked up the front of her white, cropped, sleeveless, button down blouse. She saw Mikey taking it all in before finally making eye contact. She was told her bright blue eyes were her best feature.

“You’ve seen too many movies, Mikey,” Melissa grumped, sounding far less jovial than Julie about the prospect of being eaten.

“Alright, don’t believe me. Just wait and see.” Mikey winked, and Julie stuck her tongue out at him.

They were nearing the front of the line, and any second now they’d be stepping onto drone six. It was clear Mikey intended to sit with them on the flight, and Julie braced herself for an hour and a half with his leering eyes glued to her. She supposed it could be worse.

Despite his creepy, lingering glances, he was a relatively nice guy. Unlike so many others, Mikey didn’t turn suddenly cold and hostile when she told him she wasn’t interested in a relationship. He also knew how to make her laugh, which was always welcome.

“You ever ridden on one of these things?” she asked him.

“Only a few times, when my jet pack broke down,” Mikey said with his most deadpan face, and Julie giggled.

It was their turn to board, and Julie gestured Mikey ahead. “After you, smart ass.” Melissa followed close behind, and the three of them chose a seat near a window.

“I’ve never flown before,” Melissa noted as they strapped themselves in.

“Nervous?” Mikey asked.

“Just a little.”

“Don’t be. The worst that could happen is we die horribly in a fiery crash.”

“Thanks,” Melissa said with a scowl.

Julie laughed some more. “I was on a plane when I was like five,” she put in. “I flew to L.A. I heard these things are much smoother and faster than most jets.”

“You sound like a fucking commercial,” Mikey told her.

“You sound like you want my foot in your mouth,” Julie shot back.

“Fuck yeah, I’m down to suck on some toes.”

Julie dropped her jaw to indicate she was shocked and appalled before cracking a smile, “Don’t be gross, fucking sicko.”

“Hey, you’re the one talking about putting your foot in my mouth.”

“We’re taking off,” Melissa interrupted, going tense.

Julie took Melissa’s hand and squeezed gently. “Relax, sweetie, we’re gonna be fine.” She wanted to look out the window and watch the ground zoom away, but instead she gazed calmly into her friend’s wide brown eyes and gave her courage.

Melissa was just beginning to smile and settle in when their ascent abruptly stopped and they lurched forward with tremendous speed. A startled little gasp left her parted lips, and she crushed Julie’s hand like a vice.

Once she had overcome her own sense of vertigo, Julie pretended her hand wasn’t turning to pulp and smiled sweetly at her friend. “Sshhhh, the worst part’s over. Smooth sailing from here.”

After a moment Melissa began to see that she was right. It felt smoother than riding in a car, actually. There was the quiet hum of the propellers outside, and if she looked down she could see the ground speeding past in a blur, but it was otherwise nearly impossible to tell they were in a moving vehicle. Melissa breathed a heavy sigh of relief and laughed, “I think I nearly pissed myself.”

Julie chuckled. “Well now that that’s over, you think I could have my hand back?”

Melissa looked down with embarrassment and quickly released her iron clad grip. “Sorry.”

“No worries,” Julie answered amicably, flexing her fingers.

Eighty-two minutes later, the intercom clicked on. We are now passing over the apatosaurus grazing area. We have a total of four of this species in the park. The mechanical voice began to rattle off a plethora of facts about this dinosaur, ranging from what it ate to what it weighed to when it lived, but Julie heard none of it.

Just outside the window, less than thirty feet below, was the biggest fucking lizard she had ever seen. It was majestic. Not too far off she saw one of its mates plucking leaves from an exotic tree. “Holy shit, do you fucking see that?”

“It’s beautiful,” Melissa cooed.

“It’s badass,” Mikey commented.

“Fuck yeah, it is,” Julie agreed.

For the next several minutes the drone weaved deftly above, around and between the beasts, giving Julie and her classmates an exceptional view of these creatures from an age long past, until at last it touched down on the far side of a thirty foot concrete wall, along with its other seven counterparts.

Welcome to Dinoworld. Please exit the craft.

Julie and her friends shuffled off the drone amidst a throng of kids, and they all joined the even larger crowd that was forming as the rest of her classmates exited the other aircraft in the fleet. Excited chatter reverberated through the group like a pulse of electricity, and Julie felt its influence on her.

“Fucking A! That shit was fucking insane! I can’t wait to see a goddam T-Rex.” Her voice squealed with excitement, and she was practically running through the front gate of the park, urging her friends to match her pace. It was one of those euphoric moments in a young person's life, when it was possible to believe that all of the universe existed just for her. The world was her oyster and life was a piece of pie.

Her enthusiasm was contagious, and Melissa jumped and skipped right alongside her. "Yes! This is going to be the shit!"

Mikey also shared in their joy, although he was less emphatic about seeing dinosaurs. The source of his elation had much more to do with being in the company of such a stunning girl. Julie never knew how truly infatuated he was with her, and in that moment she had never been more beautiful. Her blue eyes beamed with life and laughter. Her playful, sensuous lips stretched into a smile, revealing her perfect, pearly white teeth. Her rosy, soft cheeks were full of color. Her chocolate colored pony tail bobbed cutely with each step she took.

The cheerful trio hurried along until they reached a map and several forking paths. To the left were the ornithopods. Down the center were the bone plated and horned herbivores, like the stegosaurus, the triceratops, and the ankylosaurus, and beyond that were the various species of raptors. To the right were the large, bipedal carnivores - most notably the T-Rex.

“Ooo, I want to see the triceratops,” Melissa pleaded.

“Bitch, please, is this even a question? We have to see T-Rex first,” Julie countered.

“I told you, you’ll be seeing more of the T-Rex than you’d like when Mr. Harrison feeds your ass to him,” Mikey warned.

“Get the fuck outta here with that shit,” Julie told him. “Nobody’s getting eaten by a dinosaur.”

Mikey laughed, still not tired of his joke.

“Alright, Julie, we’ll see T-Rex first,” Melissa relented.

“Yes!” Julie pumped her fist.

“But then we’re circling back through the raptor park and checking out some triceratops.”

“Deal,” Julie agreed.

The first dinosaur on the path was the T-Rex’s smaller cousin, the allosaurus, and Julie quickly spotted two adults and a child stalking their territory. These dinosaurs weren’t kept behind giant electrical fences like in those stupid movies. They were in displays much like large predators in any other zoo - a recessed area of land with high walls on all sides that were impossible for the inhabitants to scale.

It was considerably more expansive than the area afforded a lion or a tiger, primarily because the size of these animals necessitated that space, and there were trees and rocks and plenty of natural terrain for the dinosaurs to interact with, but they were still very much conspicuous. Julie had been to zoos where the attractions hid in caves or behind shrubbery, but the allosaurus was guilty of no such transgressions.

“I wonder what they eat?” Julie asked no one in particular.

“I read that they have a cattle farm nearby that feeds most of the predators.” Melissa answered.

“There’s a sign over here that has their breakfast, lunch and dinner all scheduled for them,” Mikey remarked, “like prison.”

“Lemme see,” Julie said, and she rushed over to see what Mikey was looking at. The allosaurus’ next meal was nearly two hours away. She hoped the T-Rex would be feeding sooner. “Well these guys are cool as shit, but there’s no action here, and I think T-Rex is next. Y’all ready?”

Mikey nodded and Melissa said, “Sure.”

There was a small exhibit across the path that announced erectopus superbus dwelled behind its walls. Julie elbowed Melissa in the ribs. “Hey, they got an erectopus.” Julie giggled hysterically and Melissa joined her. “Who named these poor fucking things?”

Julie cast a glance over the wall but didn’t spot them. They were apparently a little better at concealing themselves than the allosaurus was. She quickly lost interest and had already diverted her attention back to the east side of the path, to the section she had been dying to visit since this trip was announced five weeks ago, when Melissa yelled, “Oh shit!”

Julie looked back at her friend, saw the alarm on the girl’s face, and followed her gaze to a kid teetering on the wall of the erectopus exhibit, his arms pinwheeling in a desperate attempt to maintain his balance. It was a fight he lost, and he went toppling into the pen.

Julie’s reaction was wordless and immediate. While everyone else was standing frozen in terror, she darted to the wall and leapt over it without any hesitation. Mikey was saying, “No fucking way,” behind her, but she barely heard him. There was a kid in the pit with these carnivorous dinosaurs, and he couldn’t be more than five or six years old.

Where the fuck were his parents? she wondered. She hit the ground twelve feet below and rolled, gracefully absorbing the impact, and instantly popped back up on her feet. The kid was lying on his side, clutching his shoulder, and Julie ran to his side.

"Are you okay?" she asked him.

"I think my arm is broken," the kid answered, tears filling his eyes.

Julie thought his shoulder might be dislocated, from the look of it. "What's your name, kid?"

"Tommy."

"Cute name. Now we gotta get you outta here, Tommy, okay? I'm gonna pick you up, and it'll probably hurt a little, but you're gonna be okay? You got it?"

Tommy nodded.

"Ready? Here we go." Julie scooped him up and screamed for Melissa and Mikey, “Hey! Come help me get this kid outta here!”

Her sharp blue eyes remained focused on the top of the wall, waiting for someone to appear and bail her and the kid out of this mess. We’re gonna die down here waiting for someone to give a shit. She glanced behind herself, expecting to see a beast of a lizard charging her, ready to pounce, but there was nothing but brush and trees and sand. Come on, hurry up you fucks!

Finally she saw her friends peeking over the barrier, and she thrust Tommy at them. When their outstretched arms were just short of reaching him, Julie cried, “Catch him!” She squatted, lowering the boy in her arms, and then shot up with all her strength. Tommy flew five or six feet over her head, and Mikey and Melissa both snagged him out of the air and pulled him to safety.

Julie jumped and cheered, her arms raised high in the air, and only then did she begin to wonder how she would get out of there. She was looking up, measuring the considerable distance between her fully extended fingers and the reach of her friends, when she heard movement behind her and sharp teeth clamped down on her left buttock.

Shrieking, she pulled away as the jaws closed and the soft, fatty flesh of her ass was torn to shreds. Before she could fully turn around another bite nipped at the right side of her lower back. The wound was superficial but painful, drawing another startled cry from the beautiful teen. Once she had completed her about-face and her back was to the wall, she saw there were four dinosaurs eyeing her, deciding she’d make a tasty lunch.

“Fucking hell.” The beasts were waist high and must have weighed between two hundred and three hundred pounds. They were formidable killing machines, but Julie had trained to be a kickboxer and she was a black belt in taekwondo, so she was prepared to fight.

One of them lunged at her and she deftly dodged the attack and brought her elbow down forcefully on the beast’s head. That seemed to have stunned it if nothing else, and she had just enough time to launch a side kick into the throat of the beast attacking from her left, slowing its progress. She then twisted away as a pair of jaws snapped closed on the left side of her midsection, trying to minimize the damage, and she clouted the monster that bit her, punching it in the eyeball.

It pulled back, taking a chunk of flesh with it, and Julie had just enough space to dart out of the way of the next snapping mouth. A fifth beast had evidently joined the fray at some point. It must have been an adolescent, as it stood nearly a foot shorter than its peers. Perhaps Julie hadn’t noticed it due to its slightly more diminutive stature, but she noticed as it tore into the meat on the outside of her right thigh.

Momentarily hobbled, she allowed another bite to sneak past her defenses. She was reaching for her thigh, her belly stretched taut, when razor sharp teeth dug into her tender midriff. She doubled over and slammed her knee up into the chin of the bastard that was latched onto the right side of her abdomen, and the fucker came away with a mouthful of her.

She felt the warm liquid soaking into her denim shorts and trickling down her thigh. She felt the burning pain and the horrible discomfort of her intestines trying to squeeze through the gash in her gut. She ignored it all and delivered a roundhouse kick to the face of the closest dinosaur. It connected solidly, nearly putting the poor lizard on the ground, but one of its companions took a piece of her right calf from her.

Julie pivoted on her left foot and swung her free leg at the next closest threat, but her injuries got the better of her and her accuracy was off. A hungry mouth snapped shut, and when Julie pulled her foot back she was missing her shoe, her sock, and two of her toes, and there were deep, bleeding grooves torn in the sole. Before she was back on two feet another set of jaws closed on her left forearm, biting deeply into the muscles and tendons and crunching into bone.

She aimed a powerful right cross into the nostril above her left elbow, and her left arm came free. In the meantime, she suffered a deep bite in the middle of her tummy. Skin, fat, and muscle next to her navel were stripped away, and loops of entrails spilled between her legs.

“Oh fuck,” Julie muttered. Those are my intestines. I can’t believe I’m looking at my intestines. “Help me!” she screamed, just before backing away and narrowly avoiding another bite.

Somehow the dinosaurs had drawn her into the open and the wall was no longer behind her, a fact that hit home when two sets of mouths snapped shut on the soft flesh of her dorsal region. Julie arched her back and tried to spin around to defend herself, and the youngest dinosaur managed to get in close and take a chunk out of her inner right thigh, up near her hip.

She drove her right fist down hard into the crown of its head, and had the satisfaction of seeing the fucking thing crumple to the dirt. She pulled her left hand back as another mouth snapped dangerously close to her, and her left pinky and ring fingers disappeared at the second knuckle. A second set of jaws chomped shut a split second later and took a chunk out of the love handle on her right side.

Maybe when this is over I’ll have hit my target weight of one twenty-five, Julie thought, and she nearly chuckled in spite of herself.

Looking around, she saw there were now six dinosaurs attacking, and she stomped violently on the neck of the creature lying at her feet, hoping to cut that number down to five. Incapacitating as many of the fucking things as possible seemed to be her best chance of survival, and realizing this, she threw her shoulder at the next dinosaur to get close to her.

They rolled to the ground, but unlike T-Rex, these things had arms of an adequate, perhaps even formidable length. Sharp claws raked down Julie’s back and along her sides, and dozens of sharp teeth bit into her right shoulder. Despite terrible disadvantages in strength and weight, Julie used her dexterity and dogged determination to wrestle her way into a dominant position, and she managed to get the thing in the headlock.

She screamed as bites and scrapes from her opponent’s mates ripped her back to ribbons, but she held on, and with a ferocious twist of her arms she snapped the thing’s neck. Julie, the dinoslayer, she thought with a sick sense of pride.

Rising up to her knees, she was assaulted from all sides. A pair of jaws clamped down on her right triceps, and another dug deep into her upper abdomen. The left side of her chest felt like it was in a vice, and her ribs cracked and chunks of flesh were torn from her left breast. A chunk was taken out of her right buttock.

She yanked her right arm free, then slammed her elbow into the face of the dinosaur to her right, and immediately followed that with a right hook to the bastard chowing down on her stomach. With her left forearm she clubbed the fucking beast that had crunched her ribs and shredded her tit, and Julie was able to create enough space to get her feet back under her.

The two dinosaurs she had taken down remained on the ground, but two more adolescents had joined the fray, bringing her opponents’ numbers back up to six. Taking quick stock of her condition, she saw that her shirt had lost its buttons and hung open and her bra had come off in the scuffle, so her breasts were bare. There were several deep furrows starting on the outer rim of her left areola and leading to the edge of her bosom. Several feet of intestines slapped against her thighs when she moved, and there were chunks missing from all over her body. All things considered, she figured it could be worse.

A blood transfusion and a lot of stitches, and I'll be alright. A Dinoworld employee will be down here any second to put these things down. It would be a hell of a story to tell - the time she saved a kid's life and killed a bunch of dinosaurs. She imagined the awesome scars she would have when this was all over. "Come on, you fucks," she growled, blood spilling over her lower lip.

The largest of the group lunged at her and she backed up, using its forward momentum and smashing its head into the wall. The beast was dazed, and Julie took advantage of the situation, twisting its head around and feeling the bones snap. It went down squealing, but the victory came at a cost. While her attention was focused on putting the big guy down, three other dinosaurs managed to close in on her.

One tore away more of her left love handle, another nipped at the tendons on the back of her right knee, and the third ripped at the hole in her belly, resulting in even more of her guts bulging through the ever widening gash. It also raked its claws down the front of her, starting at the top of her breasts and ending in her stomach.

Julie held her guts in with her left hand and punched the fucker assaulting her anterior square in the nose with her right, then delivered a devastating front kick that put the motherfucker on the ground. Attacks continued to come from all angles, with another bite being taken out of the left side of her midriff and another loop of bowels poking through, and a strip of flesh being torn from the back of her right hamstring.

“Help me, please!” Julie shouted. What the fuck is taking so long? she wondered. She had no idea that the permission slip her mother signed was actually a waiver, and that it stated no help would be rendered to anyone inside the dinosaurs’ living quarters. If she had bothered to read it, she would never have gone leaping over that wall.

Her elbow collided with the dinosaur nibbling at her leg. It was one of the young ones, maybe three feet tall, and its head slammed against the wall, causing it to retreat. Julie simultaneously threw her left foot out in a side kick and caught the bastard to her left in the jaw.

A pair of claws snatched her left calf before she could retract it, and she nearly lost her balance. Teeth dug into her thigh, near her left knee, and Julie performed a move she'd never even attempted before. Flipping backwards, she was able to generate an impressive amount of force with her right foot before it collided with the mouth latched onto her thigh, buying her just enough wiggle room for her to pull free and complete the back flip, landing gracefully on her feet.

Before she could get her bearings one of the smaller creatures leapt forward and planted its hind legs on Julie’s thighs, digging the claws on its hands into her sides and burying its face in her tummy. Julie grabbed the thing by its tail and screamed loudly as she yanked on it. Its claws raked deep furrows in her sides and legs and more of her innards were wrenched from her body as it fought to retain its perch on her, but Julie won the battle and flung the beast into the feet of its nearest mate.

Another attack came from her left and Julie tried to fend it off by throwing a left jab, but so much of her usual quickness was lost due to her weakened state, and rather than her fist connecting with the dinosaur’s snout, teeth sheared through her elbow like daggers and her arm was ripped in half. She was staring stupefied at the bloody stump that used to be her left arm when three mouths converged on her belly all at once.

The poor girl grit her teeth as her midsection was rightly shredded, and she stumbled backwards until her shoulder blades hit the wall. She lifted her left knee into the chin of one of the monsters feeding on her bowels, and she dropped her right elbow onto the head of another. They pulled back, and one of them looked at her with a rope of her intestines dangling from either side of its mouth. It reminded her of a dog eating spaghetti, and for one crazy moment Julie nearly laughed.

The moment passed when the third dinosaur ripped a huge mess of plumbing from her body, and she looked down at what was once her smooth, soft abdomen. Now there was blood spurting everywhere, jagged flaps of mangled flesh, and so many exposed internal organs that were never meant to see the light of day. Fuck, this is bad. It finally began to sink in that she was going to die down here.

The largest dinosaur lunged forward and snapped at her ribs below her right breast, and she felt the bones splintering beneath its formidable bite. It ripped a sizable chunk from her, and meanwhile the two adolescents chewed through her left knee while one of their older companions crunched her left calf between its teeth. She grabbed at her thigh with her one remaining hand, but it was useless and the lower half of her leg came unattached.

Incredulous, she watched as the sickening beast claimed its prize. It clutched her limb and casually stripped the meat from her calf like a person eating a chicken leg. Her sneaker was still on her foot. It was surreal. I can’t believe it. This is how I’m going to die. This is really it. Eaten by fucking dinosaurs.

Julie had never felt such utter hate and disgust for another creature in all her sixteen years. It was so unfair. These stupid fucks were going to live happy, leisurely lives after feasting on her flesh and ending everything she had worked for. What might she have accomplished if not for these stupid lizards? What joys and experiences might she have had? I never even got to see the T-Rex, she thought sullenly.

With only one full leg left, Julie dropped to her butt, her back still to the wall, and she watched the things eat. One of the little ones pecked at her right foot and calf, leaving the bone bare in some places. The other adolescent fed on her right arm. Three of the larger beasts gorged themselves on her midsection and the veritable cornucopia of internal organs there that were no longer internal.

A large sac spilling bodily fluids was snapped in two right in front of her, and Julie thought it was her liver. She saw her stomach still mostly in tact attached to her small intestines and resting on her lap. She watched as her bladder was ripped from her body and her piss dripped from the mouth of the dinosaur that devoured it. The largest dinosaur found some tiny little sacs inside her, and Julie wondered if they were her ovaries, or maybe her kidneys.

The young one at her leg had picked most of her right foot clean and was going to town on her calf. She'd always had meaty calves. The bastard that had claimed her lower left leg was still finding strips of meat on the bone, leaving the main course to his pals. She looked at her right arm and saw that most of the flesh on her forearm was gone, and the beast there had moved on up to her biceps and triceps.

Two dinosaurs munching on the same loop of her entrails nearly kissed, and Julie remembered the scene from Lady and the Tramp. Maybe that's why she thought of a dog eating spaghetti earlier. She smiled sadly, remembering all the sweet moments of her childhood, the classic Disney movies and eating too much candy and playing with dolls, never knowing that it was all leading up to this terrible ending.

One brave beast finally slurped up her stomach, the acid burning its tongue, but it didn't seem too put off. It quickly went back in for more of her guts. Julie saw ribs and a bit of her hip bone glistening in the sun. The innards in her lap were dwindling, as well as what was left of her belly. One of the beasts had already opted for the meat on her thighs in lieu of the tender, tastiness of her vanishing abdomen. Not much left of me.

Above her someone was calling out. She heard her name. Julie looked up, her once radiant cheeks ashen and sallow, her skin slick with sweat, her blue eyes wide and traumatized, yet she was still beautiful. She saw Melissa and Mikey peeking over the wall, and Melissa screamed. "Eaten by erectopussies," Julie called to them. "How about that?" She chortled softly, then her diaphragm was snapped in half and she could no longer breathe.

Suffocating, she looked up at the sky and found the sun. It was so bright and beautiful. They always told you not to look directly at the sun or you'd go blind, but Julie didn't need to worry about that anymore. She pondered the little she'd heard about God in her short life. Some people still believed in Heaven. They believed God was good. She had hoped they were right, and she had almost believed herself, but now she knew better. A benevolent god would never have allowed something like this to happen. Soon she would be gone forever, and there would be nothing else.

Her world was ending. She was ending. I can't believe this is happening. I just wanted to see some dinosaurs, and now I want to go home. I don't want to die. I want to live. Tears rolled down her cheeks and the brightness of the sun faded to darkness.
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