Really glad you liked it, Squunch. Of the people who have been active on this thread lately, you were definitely the target audience for this one.

You know, i’m not really into the whole crushing thing, but if you ever have another death involving blades kinda like Tensi’s in your Death Factory series, I’d love it if a certain blue-eyed, steel-willed brunette was the victim.

Jarrod, I hear you. That thing about her taking a drink and it spilling out her stomach is really turning me on now. I think I’ve got the start of a story coming together where something like that could happen.

I’d love to hear any other ideas you have, although I make no promises on being able to turn them into something bigger here. There were some great suggestions in this thread about rats eating Julie’s belly and a failed drug smuggling that I’ve been meaning to flesh out for a year or two now, and I haven’t even started on them.

OfixN, I’m working on a few changes to Surviving the Game and it should be up before too long.