Sweet, that’d be really cool, Squunch. I hate to put any boundaries or limitations on where you go with your story, but if I may ask that you keep her face intact. A big part of the fantasy for me is facial expressions, and if you can’t see the terror in her eyes because she has no eyeballs or you can’t see her slack-jawed horror because her face has been mutilated, it ruins the scene for me.

I struggled with keeping the dinosaur story believable. Part of me really wanted to just have dinosaurs running amuck and multiple girls getting mauled to death, and I also kept toying with the idea that Mr. Harrison really did make a deal to feed his students to dinosaurs. They both sounded like they’d be fun ideas to explore.

In the end I decided to go the realistic route, and while I think it’s nutty to have a power grid that can easily be sabotaged or go offline as the only thing protecting your guests from bloody, gory death, there is some precedence for idiots ending up in pens with the animals at the zoo.

Like this guy:
https://nypost.com/2019/01/22/visitors-watch-man-get-mauled-to-death-after-he-climbed-into-lion-enclosure/

Or this shitty situation:
https://www.cnn.com/2016/05/29/us/cincinnati-zoo-gorilla-shot/index.html

That gorilla thing was really my main inspiration for how Julie’s dinosaur mishap played out. I then considered that if you were a multi-billion dollar corporation powered by greed, and dinosaurs cost a fortune to create, you might just let your guests die if they were negligent enough to jump into an enclosure like this.