The last sentence of the paragraph where Tilly bit into the heart seems to be missing a word.

but still, oh my god I love you so much. That image of Tilly massaging Mongar through herself, fuuuuck mee! I can't wait to see what other monsters will appear. Maybe add some magic and spells into play? Have you planned far ahead? I'd really like an atwt with a slime ;)

Also looking forward for when you post your sci-fi stories!