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>>18404 Then the trinity shall rejoice, we are not worthy of such unholy scriptures!

>>18405 Thank you, Onix! Squunch is definitely great at including emotions in his stories, and I admire him for it.

>>18406 Thanks a lot for both the praise and critique. I'll definitely think more about that in future stories. The hardest aspect of writing, at least in my experience, is conveying emotions, so I might tend to shy away from it too much. Emotions are definitely a big part of what makes a story great though, so I'll work on it!
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