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Same anon as >>18474 but with a name now. I'd still love to see whatever you come up with but I was motivated enough to try writing something myself. It has some vivid violence but if you're willing to give it a read I'd appreciate any critical feedback you have. I've never written anything like this so I'm not sure how it came out.

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