>>18492

Much obliged for taking the time to read and give feedback.

Regardless of what I wrote here I do find season 1 M'gann to be absolutely adorkable and I really miss that version of her character. I wasn't trying to be mean to her which is why I tried to write her as bravely self-sacrificing rather than as a simple victim. What I really wanted to look at was Conner's disturbing rage and lack of a developed personality to balance it out in the first season.

I also appreciate your compliment on my writing technique. I know this story wasn't to your taste (was it the heavy violence, the characters it was directed at, or both?) but if you have a prompt (Young Justice S1, no feet/pegging/scat/male-on-male) I'd love to give it a try and see if I can write something that you'll enjoy reading.

If I continue with this story it will still have some similarly dark themes but won't need the same excessive gore and violence. That was there to compensate for the lack of any sexual content which I'd lean toward but didn't have a place for in this scene. I have ideas for 2 scenes to complete it. The next one would still follow the idea of M'gann helping Conner control his rage by letting him hurt her, but this time in a more rape centered incident. The last scene would wrap things up by following the unexpected way that this leads to them breaking up prior to season 2.