Anonymous nailed part of it for sure, I don't really care about accuracy, there's no reason to stick to canon, but even then, I don't like M'gann getting hurt like that by someone who doesn't show affection, doesn't feel bad, and at least offer love afterwards.

asidefrom that, it's just more personal taste, I'm not super into graphic messy beatings, or tbh hetero sex, lol. it is your story, i am not trying to say do or don't do anything, we all write what we like :)

as far as your ideas to follow up, the idea of M'gann being hate-fucked still makes me very sad, but it would be less unsettling than her being beat half to death by someone she loves.

prompts….hmm..


1) M'gann isn't familiar with Earth customs, so when the team wants to roast her for a holiday, she knows it will kill her, but it's an earth tradition!


2) M'gann (perhaps coming off of one of the abusive stories) has left Conner for a female companion. if you don't want snuff, they could just play. if you want snuff, most of the female members of the team are human, and M'gann IS a Martian and super strong, accidents happen ;)


3) M'gann is with another female member of the team and they are captured. fight to the death or choose one to be snuffed, or one is forced to execute the other, or a double cross, but some form of 'only one gets to live'.


not sure if any of those tickle your fancy at all. tbh I will keep reading regardless, my reservations weren't particularly strong. just keep sharing the love of an excellent, underappreciated show! <3