Two very POSITIVE aspects I'd like to point out.

a) PACING
- It's quite common for people with interesting ideas to rush some scenes too much. Not you. :) You took time with the details, it was almost like re-watching one's favorite action scene in slow motion.

b) sex AND gore
Far too many art pieces in this genre are overly focused on the bloody bits while forgetting it's main purpose is to be sexual as well. A simple example of what I mean - you read a decapitation story where the victim is beheaded. And… that's it. No one fucks the body, no one even enjoys him/herself while watching, nothing.

I wish more stories had the attention to detail and also still kept things spicy as yours did! :)