I echo the thoughts above. This was fantastic, and I certainly hope you continue to write more in this vain, and that you share it with us.

On a selfish note, I'd like to add that I prefer it when the girl's face remains mostly intact, and not pummeled to a pulp like Farren's. Farren didn't really seem like my type though, so I didn't mind much. Rumer was the girl I was interested in, and her death was fantastic.

Regarding the continuity error, what I've started doing is keeping tabs at the bottom of the story with each wound inflected on my character. For example:

1) just to the left of her navel
2) above her right breast
3) her right buttock
etc.

It helps keep me from placing bullet wounds, stab wounds, or arrows in exactly the same location, and it helps me keep track of how many total wounds have been inflicted. It also ends up turning me on as I read down the list and imagine all these injuries on a hot, dying girl's body.