>>18744

Thank you so much. I always do like to have as much detail as possible without sounding like I’m dragging on about a specific point, instead of just being like…“Her guts fell out”.
There is so much more that can be done with that. The feeling of them, the sound, the thoughts of the unlucky victim as she see’s them with her own eyes.
However I really like to focus on the mental state of the character. Sure you can have her go through some awful stuff but I want to know how she is feeling and whats racing through her mind and thoughts as these horrific things happen to her.

I do understand what you mean about Farren though. Originally she was meant to be this nameless assassin with a mask that doesn’t speak at all but I decided to give her a bit of a personality, look and name instead.
I think next time in the future stories I write, I will focus on all characters a little bit more, as I admit I spent most of my time on Rumer with he being the protagonist after all.

I am open to requests actually! However It won’t be anything like Scat, Loli, or Furry. Or anything where the person getting “guro’d” is a guy. Otherwise, let me know. Feel free to drop me an email if you want to discuss stuff.

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>>18749

Really glad you enjoyed it Bloodlust. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

And to be honest with you, I kinda agree. I like the idea of beauty contrasted with gore and violence, hence the reason somewhat I’m into guro in the first place. I avoided messing up Rumer’s face cause I still wanted her to be beautiful even in death, however like I mentioned above…I always saw Farren as a secondary character, a sort of obstacle that Rumer had to overcome. An excuse to have Rumer go through a lot of horrific stuff to come out on top even if she dies. So messing up Farren’s looks was a bit more plot based at the time.
In the future I will likely be going to avoid the faces more, so even in a really rough situation the characters will still be all good looks wise.

And those tabs is a great idea. There are so many times where I had to scroll back up several paragraphs to remind myself of what I did to Rumer. This would save me so much time and effort ahaha. Im surprised I didn’t think of something like that sooner.

Hope to read one of your new Julie stories soon!