well that was interesting! this new version of M'gann you are going with is a menace to society, while being completely innocent….I kinda love it! I don't mean to pressure you at all, you write whatever you want, but it could be funny if one of the homicidal misunderstandings ends in her being VERY confused about why she is being executed, lol.

regardless, this one showed a really solid grasp of the thoughts of your characters, more consistent than i can usually be. keep up the good stuff!