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That was a good story, but do you think it's wise to lean towards an all female cast? I loved the little shotas well placed here and there.Without them it seems like a great food without salt.For example I loved the brother&sister scene in your last story.I was hoping of a mother and son in the next one.You have a great style but I think this limits your scope a little.
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