>>19424
If it's really you (Anonymous is such an anonymous username!), I am excited that you are intending to write more! I think Lena has a lot of experimenting and learning to do. And Emily also showing off her skills.

My own preference is f victims, but I must say you did justice to m victims in the throat-cutting sequel.

A victim POV is an interesting twist, but I always find them less convincing - the story has to maintain detail and coherence as it develops, but the story-teller can't possibly do so. Ignoring the obvious paradox of the narration having to come from the grave, it's also fundamentally incredible that a hanging person could be even vauguely aware of their own dying kicks, for example, or their agonal chest movements. Whereas the third person narrator can observe and describe in great detail, either with clinical detachment, or with intense sexual / emotional involvement, as with Lena and Emily.

Either way, have at it! I sit here with bated breath! :)