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2020/02/05
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Very good, I've looking forward to an update of this one!
While reading it just before I went to work today, I was struck by inspiration! Not knowing if you've already laid out the story or flesh it out(no pun intended)as you go every author is different after all, I came up with a scenario which could be used as either the ending\alternate ending and outline for a sequel. I'll try to keep this relatively brief, unlike the last one lol!
After the twins have received their special birthday and their friends have had the "tastiest meal ever!" and are now playing party "themed" games while enjoying the and the sun on they're cute little bodies the twins' friend Lucy takes notice of something. After watching Mr. Marshall clean the spits, she asks him she could try it out saying she kinda wants to know what it feels like inside but not completely spitted. Though Mr. Marshall is reluctant at first saying the spit is sharp and she might get hurt Lucy counters with the promise to be perfectly still and that he can take a lot more pictures to complete her photo session! Admitting defeat, Mr. Marshall agrees so long as Lucy's Mom says its OK. Lucy runs over to ask her Mom for permission who agrees with little convincing while Mrs. Marshall who was standing next to her catches just a glint of hunger in the other woman's eye. All the other girls catch wind of whats about to happen and ask to try it out as well. At the suggestion of Megan and Barney's(both still in the cannibal make up)parents their kids will take turns posing as the cannibal spitting the girls while an adult will hold the spit steady just outside the camera's view.
Starting with Lucy each girl in turn gets up on a table and while on hands and knees then on their backs the spit is carefully inserted into their pussies and anuses so as to experience both styles. Last up is Megan having cleaned off the paint off her body gets on the table looking back at her brother(who if it weren't for the face paint would be red as a beet from the up close view of his sister's ass and pussy)saying maybe one you'll have this on your plate while wiggling her perky butt at him!
After the photo session is done Lucy asks Mr. Marshall if the fire pits were still hot, who responds asking why she wants to know though having a pretty good idea, the girl says she wants to be spitted and cooked alive like her friends! Megan immediately pipes up that she wants be cooked on the other spit, however this quickly results in all the other girls crying out no fair they want to be cooked as well. Mrs. Marshall and Lucy's Mom swiftly stop the argument and order the girls to line up shoulder to shoulder then asks them who wants to be spitted either through your pussy or ass then slowly roasted alive over hot coals? Rather unsurprisingly(seeing as you were kind of vague on the boy\girl ratio on the guest list I'm just going to make a guess)all twenty of them raises they're hands. The parents tell the kids to go play while they have a quick conference. Calling the girls back over, Mr. Marshall tells them the bad news that there's not enough fuel left to cook another girl let alone two, seeing the obvious disappointment on their faces he spring the good news. After checking with the other parents who weren't there, they've decided to hold a BIG block party for the neighborhood on the Summer Solstice since its the longest day the year with the most daylight and everyone of them will spitted and cooked alive, additionally they can each invite a couple of friends or family who live outside the neighborhood to come and eat them! As an added bonus, any girl at the party in the 8-11 age range could volunteer to be roasted so long as their parents agreed. The girls were overjoyed at the news and Lucy asked how many would cooked to start. Her replying they'll start with out five them at first, the remaining girls will responsible for turning their friends spits by hand and basting their meat once the first group is done they'll ask for at least two volunteers the other spots to filled by the remaining girls then the process will be repeated until all of them were spitted and roasted to a golden brown. Anne then asks how long till the Summer Solstice?, her Mom replying it's in one week. This gets them all very excited, Lucy and Megan hugging their naked little bodies together jumping up and down chanting "In week were gonna be juicy Meat"!
I think this is longer then I said it be but when inspiration hits…. never the less feel free to use this however you like. If I can figure out how to make a file of the other suggestion I made, I plan to clean it up and fill it out if only for my own personal library.;-)
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