I really, really like the sex in this story, it might actually be my favourite of yours so far!

The only thing that would make it even better was if it featured an early teenage piglet … Oh would you look at that, you've already set up a sequel with Melissa ;)

Seriously though, that sequel is begging to be written. Maybe you can explore the willingness aspect of it all. Usually (not always) your story characters are very willing and eager, and I love that. It might be interesting to see some characters doubting or resisting, even just a little bit. Like Melissa for example, she is very reluctant to become meat but still has a morbid curiosity for it. Maybe someone could somehow "talk her into it" or just downright sell her to the eager meat truck driver!

The appeal of it for Melissa seems to be the sexual aspect. It would be nice to see her explore her sexuality as well, perhaps with Sam or Keith, or the driver. Or even with, and I would LOVE to see this, the people eating her!

I love your stories though, keep it up, remember to take breaks, and have fun. Thank you!