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Tali gets Shepard and Miranda to use her like a urinal, causing her to die of infection.

This is an alternate version of a story which I already posted to HF, and I'm posting this here to gauge interest.

Tali's Gross Proposal (Extreme Version)
(Cons, Snuff, Watersports, Puke, Scat)

It was lunch time, and Tali, Liara, and Shepard gathered for their regular lunchtime routine where they ate and exchanged stories. The asari and human were nude as they sat, something which was par for the course for the girls aboard the Normandy, casual sex being common and accepted. Tali always felt left out when she saw the naked bodies of her friends, or walked past a random crewmember getting railed from behind. her species unusual immune system meant she could never expose her body, meaning that she could never truly join in on the lecherous fun they had. Shepard and the others did their best to make her feel included, but the clothed rubbing and touching could only go so far. As Shepard regaled them with the tale of how had Grunt facefucked her so hard she blacked out, The quarians longing only grew.

Finishing her story with a graphic description of how she had puked up almost a full liter of Grunt’s cum, Shepard announced that she needed to take a piss, and stood up to go to the bathroom. There was a hissing sound from the other end of the table as Tali’s visor depressurized and detached from her helmet. Finally having had enough of just watching, Tali removed her faceplate and looked Shepard dead in the eyes with her unmasked face. At the same time, billions of microscopic pathogens entered her immunocompromised body.

“Piss on my face.” Was all Tali said to the commander. The unmasked Quarians tone made it clear that this was a command, not a suggestion.

“Tali, your mask-” Was all the flabbergasted Shepard could say before Tali interrupted her.

“I know, Piss on my face.” She repeated

“Tali, we need to get you antibiotics or you’ll die!” Interjected a concerned Liara.

“I don't care. Piss on my face.” Tali repeated for a third time. Her voice was resolute, without a hint of doubt or hesitation.

Liara and Shepard could only look at eachother with confusion. Both coming to the conclusion that Tali wouldn’t be persuaded off her course, they shrugged their shoulders. “Guess we better piss on your face.” said Liara.

Tali beamed. In truth, she expected the two to run off and find medicine, leaving Tali alone to play with herself as she perished from the pathogens. This was a much better outcome indeed. Cupping her hands under her chin, she prepared to receive her friend's urine. Tali hoped they enjoyed using her as their urinal, but sighed as her head began to throb, a reminder of her impending mortality.

Shepard and Liara presented their pussies to the kneeling quarian, giving the girl a good look as they spread their labia. Tali had seen all this before, of course, but never as a truly involved participant, so it still felt fresh to her. Shepard had a small patch of fire red hair which mached the hair on her head abover her pussy, which still looked tight despite her many years of intense sex. Tali looked over to see how Liara compared Like the rest of the rest of her body, the Asari was completely hairless, although her groin was a slightly darker shade of blue than the rest of her.

Both of the women thrust their hips forward, grinding themselves against the quarians lips. The Tali savoured the taste of their cunts on her tongue, A taste the likes of which she had never experienced, nor would she ever experience again. As Tali breathed deeply, inhaling the unique aroma, she felt a sharp pain in her chest as the deadly pathogens reached her lungs. Enjoying the unique pain she did so again, taking account of how her body was reacting to the quickly progressing infection. Her joints were aching, her head was pounding, and every breath was like inhaling fire, but Tali wouldn’t have had it any other way.

Liara was the first to let loose her bladder, pissing directly into the quarians maw. Lost in her own world, the liquid suddenly filling her mouth was a complete shock. Inhaling in surprise, she drew a large quantity of piss into her lungs, causing her to cough and choke violently. Each of her spasming coughs caused her delicious pain, but be dared not dwell on that. Liara was still pissing, and Tali would be damned if she passed up her one opportunity to drink asari piss because she was too busy choking. Regaining her composure, Tali began to gulp down her acrid urine.

Tali looked up at Liara as she sucked the piss out of her pussy, looking at the underside of her perky blue tits as she swallowed her urine. Finally, the blue beauty's stream died down to a trickle as she ran out of piss. Tali opened her mouth, showing her comrades that she had completely drunk the womans pee. At the same time Tali was hit by an extreme feeling of dizziness and fatigue, the room started to spin as her eyes rolled back into her head and she began to pass out.

“No way I’m letting you go before we finish here.” Said Shepard, stabilizing the quarian by placing a hand on her shoulder. Snapping back to reality, Tali smiled once again. Her head was swimming and her breathing was laboured as the infection was taking its toll on her body. But like Shepard said, she was going to hold on until both the women's bladders were empty.

Shepard back up slightly, then unleashed a veritable jet stream of piss. Showering Tali the high pressure stream struck her. Liara giggled at the sight. “I guess you weren’t lying when you said you needed to take a piss earlier.” Shepard replied “nope.” and let out a long, hearty sigh as she relieved herself on tali’s face.

Tali, on her part, tried to gulp down the stream, but it was far too much for any one person to drink down. Shepards piss dripped down her face and soaked the quarians enviro suit. The torrent was so strong that Tali was unable to breathe, as any time she took a breath all that she sucked down was urine.

Thankfully, the torrent of Shepards piss started to die down until it was nothing more than a weak trickle. Finally able to take another agonizing breath, Tali entered into another violent coughing fit. Her friends looked on quizzically as the quarian hawked up globs of blood and bits of her own lungs.

“To be honest, i’m surprised it took this long for the internal hemorrhaging to start, I thought it would have come after she slurped down my stream.” said the asari scientist, her tone clinical.

“Yeah, I was sure she’d be gone by now. But it looks like she’s still fighting.” Replied Shepard. As the pair chatted casually, Tali fought for her life as she struggled to breathe. However, she was indeed a fighter, and was determined to draw out the maximum amount of pleasure from this encounter before she perished.

“Is that all you Bosh'tets have got?” challenged Tali, weakly. Liara and Shepard smirked at one another, more than happy to rise to the occasion. Liara took her hand and quickly inserted it into the quarians mouth, sliding it down her throat and causing her to violently gag. Stomach lurching, tali puked up a large quantity of rapidly congealing blood, as well as the lunch she ate just moments ago. Chunks of puke slid down Tali’s chin and collected in the lip of her helmet. This was exactly what Tali had in mind. Excited to see how far her friends would go, the dying quarian waited for their next move.

With her hand now covered in Tali’s bloody vomit, Liara quickly forced her fingers down shepards open mouth and into throat. causing the specter to spew forth a tidal wave of watery vomit, right onto Tali’s waiting face. Shepards puke cascaded over her face, leaving no part unsoiled as it blocked her nostrils.

“Holy fuck! A little warning next time please!” Spluttered Shepard, globs of spittle running down her face as she complained to her friend. Recovering, Shepard gathered the drool and vomit which were still present in her mouth and spat at tali, clearing her throat as the glob of pukey saliva hit her square between the eyes. “Honestly though, I’m a little surprised to still have a gag reflex.”

“Warning you would have spoiled the surprise for both you and her.” Responded Liara, gesturing towards the puke covered quarian. “Besides, it’s harder to gag if you’re expecting it. If I told you, you would have gone into throatfuck mode and not given me a drop of puke.” Liara rubbed her blood and puke coated hand on her outer thigh in an attempt to clean it off, however this didn’t have much effect other than simply smearing the mixture onto her skin.

All the colour had drained from tali’s face, and a constant trickle of blood was now escaping through the corners of her mouth. Despite her state, Tali was in pure ecstasy, although she lacked the strength to outwardly show it. As Tali started to once again wobble and tip, Shepard was also there again to halt her. “Oh no, you’re not dying yet, not until I get another turn with you.” Shepard turned around and pressed her asshole to Tali’s sticky face, positioning it so that her sphincter led directly into the quarians mouth. Tali was too out of it to fully understand what was going on, but she knew that it was sexy as fuck.

Grunting, Shepard let out a long, solid turd straight into the awaiting mouth of the dying girl. Tali was too weak to do anything but accept it, even as her last available airway was cut off by the Huge piece of shit. Shepard released her grasp, letting the quarian fall to the ground. Tali didn’t even struggle, the blood loss from her internal bleeding having completely sapped her strength.
Shepard looked onward, watching as the light in her friends eyes glaze over. Smiling, shepard dropped a few more turds onto the body, then went to get a closer look at the corpse.

Tali looked upwards with bloodshot eyes, her hair was matted to her scalp with piss and puke, and Shepards shit stuck out of her mouth like it was a cigar. Shepard beckoned Liara over as well, and the two inspected her body from head to toe, appreciating the finer details of her body. Together, they noticed the blood that had collected down her chin and neck, having leaked out of her mouth. They noticed the sticky blood clots that stained her suit after her violent coughing fit. Finally, they looked at her crotch, noticing that it was completely soaked. This wasn’t piss however, Liara had learned that fact with a quick taste. This was cum. The pair looked at eachother and high fived, genuinely happy that they were able to make the quarians death wish come true, and make it pleasurable at that.

“Can we grab another bite to eat? You kinda made me puke up my lunch back there.” Shepard asked Liara point blank, causing the asari to giggle. Together, they left to grab another meal, leaving Tali’s filth covered corpse for someone else to deal with.

The End.

What did you think? Should I bother posting this other version to HF?

Another story that I was thinking of writing was a very pregnant Tali getting the crew to destroy her belly. But I know that's pretty extreme, even for here.
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