>>20533
Please do leave a comment now and then on the stories you like. Even a simple "I enjoyed the story" is a big encouragement for the author, meaning that you as a reader get more stories in return! :)

>>20522
I also like the large amount of backstory and buildup. If I have one small complaint about your stories though, Edward, it is that the endings sometimes feels a little short and underdeveloped. With such solid buildups as you consistently write, the reader might feel a little disappointed if the ending isn't as fleshed out as the rest of the story. An example that comes to mind is "Polkan's Paradise of Pleasure", though you've also handled this excellently in stories such as "Rosie gets in a stew" and "This Little Piggy Went to Market".

The ending is just another part of the story, true, but it is nevertheless an important one. By ending in this context I mean the actual cooking itself, so if I had to choose, using this story as an example, I'd rather have you skip the girls' antics with Frank in favor of a more detailed description of the undressing, preparation and cooking of the girls. Especially in a long, epic story like this, I think the ending is a very important part. It's also, at least for me, the most difficult bit to write so I totally understand the struggle behind it.

Remember, I love your stories to bits and I'm only sharing this because I want you to improve your writing even further. (Idk how that's possible though, as you're officially the best author on this site :p )