>>13646
Although my monkey brain wants nothing more than reading about Emily's demise sooner rather than later, you don't have to squeeze her in (figuratively) earlier in the story if that doesn't fit well. I was thinking that her chapter might be a nice break after a whole group has been snuffed, where the story can narrow down and focus on fewer characters for a chapter or two.

Of course, it's up to you. Remember that you don't owe me anything just because I offer encouragement and criticism on your work. I'll be happy to wait a while longer to see my requested character if the story is better that way.