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>Although my monkey brain wants nothing more than reading about Emily's demise sooner rather than later, you don't have to squeeze her in (figuratively) earlier in the story if that doesn't fit well. I was thinking that her chapter might be a nice break after a whole group has been snuffed, where the story can narrow down and focus on fewer characters for a chapter or two.

Don't worry loke, the earlier insertion fits perfectly - so to speak. I've got a lot of plotty stuff happening in the 2nd half of the story so I'd like to keep that clear. I've already started writing about Emily so all is well. Of course, everything is subject to change until I post it, so who knows...

In any case, I'd already decided to add some characters to the first part of the story and Emily fits perfectly. I might do Sol's 2nd character there too. I've got a lot to fit in, and Bob's got lots of machines to test...