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>Ah, right I'd completely forgotten that I'd turned the tables and suggest a character similar to my other half.

Ah! So now you finally admit it! I actually find that rather hot.

>Well, it was years ago by this point so can you really blame me?

*Checks notes* Yeah, I suppose 18 months just about counts as 'years'. Probably feels like years, if you've been waiting.

>Still, I am rather looking forward to the coming changes. So far, I'd say the writing is on point with just enough descriptiveness and not too much exposition. Could use a little more squishing and crunching, but I know we'll get to those parts well enough.

It's kinda hard just to launch right into the fun stuff without setting the scene first. I suppose I could have done that at the beginning of ch. 1 instead of Tara's rapey beating, but what's done is done. You'll just have to wait in a state of delicious anticipation.