>>13722

Of course, I have nothing against getting to know characters more, (although in these stories where they are going to die that is not always a good idea because when you get to know them too well you don't want them to die anymore.)
But there are better ways of introducing characters when you actually make them do actions rather than just write their thoughts or conversations.

>>13710
well, nothing means that until the last moment story characters did nothing but just had irrelevant small talk. Samantha or anyone else did not even pet a kitten or did anything memorable. so all that could be shortened without any loss.
even the main part where Samantha decides to become meat girl is so super short that it is even surprising to the level of funny :)

But maybe It is because I had some different expectations it looks like the story is basically just an audition so nothing much can happen in principle.