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> Do you mean the deaths ?

Yeah, I always find it a bit of a shame when the deaths are too quick and done. After all, you send a lot of time building up the world, anticipation and the characters. So isn't it only fair to give the characters time to "enjoy" their deaths ? :-P Or more realistically giving our dear farmers time to savor the process, a bit like you savor a good meal and don't just ge it down in one gulp.
I dunno, I just maybe feel like the first death was a bit quick for my taste. But then again, I like your writing style, so I'm confident I'll enjoy it :-D .

>The idea with the breeding farm is an nice idea, and I did consider something like that, but decided it added too much unnecessary complexity.

Yeah, it might have to be a standalone story centered around that idea, or maybe a sequel, for it to work well.
I tried to look up for the story I was thinking about. I'm pretty sure it's one of Edward Hyde under his old name Pere Fouettard, that I read on his old pastebin archive, but I can't seem to find the story. Hopefully it hasn't been lost.